Need some advice

So I'm cleaning up my Etsy store a bit and I have a few pussyhats currently listed (and will be listing a few more) as there's another Women's March in January.

This is the description I have for one of my pussyhats.

On January 20, 2018 women will be back on the streets and nastier than ever with the 2018 women's march.

Prepare with a festive pussyhat made with a cranberry and white yarn with silver metallic thread in the yarn. Wear it proudly to show solidarity with women across the US and the world.

I'm a campaign staffer who has devoted my professional life to progressive causes. Knitting is my way of staying sane during the Trump administration.

Is there any details that you would add? Leave out?