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29. I like you think it's beautiful.

Sun Dec 1, 2013, 09:21 PM

Dec 2013

I think a kind of beauty is what I was aiming at.
The first two friends who read it, one said it was
the most Christian story he's read (as in Christian
"action," he said) and the other saw it as completely evil
and frightening. I'll take "beautiful" any day.

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My story "Men Have Names" just went online at The Adirondack Review. [View all] A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 OP

Congrats! F. Kafka Dec 2013 #1

Thanks, F.... Loved your Metamorphosis. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #3

congrats to you! n/t RainDog Dec 2013 #2

Thanks, Rain. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #4

Wow, I'm so happy for you, A-Schwarzenegger! graywarrior Dec 2013 #5

Thanks, gray. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #17

I just read it, could not stop to bookmark. I loved it, congratulations...n/t monmouth3 Dec 2013 #6

Wow, thank you. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #18

well done!!!! Demo_Chris Dec 2013 #7

Thanks, Chris. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #20

Congrats malaise Dec 2013 #8

I hope you enjoy it. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #21

Reading it now.... PeaceNikki Dec 2013 #9

A good read so far, will finish tonight. redwitch Dec 2013 #10

Hope you enjoy, thanks, red. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #22

"He had a gangly grace about him that made me frown and grin at the same time." lumberjack_jeff Dec 2013 #11

Ha! A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #23

I'm reading it now, Schwarzie.. very interesting! Cha Dec 2013 #12

Thanks, Cha. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #24

It did, Schwarz.. right until the very end.. Cha Dec 2013 #33

OK, done reading. You're a very gifted writer. PeaceNikki Dec 2013 #13

Thanks, Nikki. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #25

I just took the time to read the entire story: time well spent! Divernan Dec 2013 #14

I'm happy you enjoyed it, Divernan. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #26

Congrats. It was a good read. Quirky. KittyWampus Dec 2013 #15

Thank you, Kitty. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #27

Just wonderful!! Big K and R. nt riderinthestorm Dec 2013 #16

Thank you, rider. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #28

It was beautiful. Thank you. ancianita Dec 2013 #19

I like you think it's beautiful. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #29

the comment about it being "christian" reminded me wellstone dem Dec 2013 #31

I know what you mean, but... A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #35

Great! I felt the zen-ness of going with a self with no name (not that zen itself was your aim), ancianita Dec 2013 #32

Thank you for this, ancianita. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #36

... ancianita Dec 2013 #41

The previous title was "Continents Drifting" A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #44

Just finished wellstone dem Dec 2013 #30

Thank you, wd. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #37

The great mystery Generic Other Dec 2013 #34

Yep. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #38

Huh ismnotwasm Dec 2013 #39

Thank you, ism. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #40

A very enjoyable read. redwitch Dec 2013 #42

Thanks, rw. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #43

Good to see you!!! WilliamPitt Dec 2013 #45

He's out & about. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #46

Final kick for anybody who could use some odd reading A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #47

Thanks for kicking - I missed your OP. myrna minx Dec 2013 #48

You, too, myrna. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #51

I truly enjoy your imagery... very captivating read, as always. Ellipsis Dec 2013 #49

Thanks, Ellipsis. A-Schwarzenegger Dec 2013 #50