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Mon Oct-27-03 07:35 PM
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| The Extinction of the Republican party ..A Poem |
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Edited on Mon Oct-27-03 08:13 PM by proud patriot
POETIC EXTINCTION
desperate grasping , barely holding
unexplained convulsions of logic
Lashing out fierce screams of blame
thinking of survival Wailing Flailing
lying dealing death to surrvive
Screams , Pain , hate, agony , fear oh yes FEAR
Eating one's own, you know that kind of Fear
The fear of nightmares
Camouflage it , hide behind it , metamorph it
puffing plumage raising hackles loudly barking changing colors
altering strategies smokescreens of stench
hungry predators, following the trail , searching
weakened hiding running Scared
hoping hoping predators circling focussed dedicated hungry
backed into a corner
Cowering Sniveling Crying
The extinction of the republican party
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Mon Oct-27-03 07:40 PM
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Thats really strong language! It had me a little frightened for your life until that last line.
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Mon Oct-27-03 07:43 PM
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| 2. LOL Well actually Micheal Moore's speech at SFU last week |
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Mon Oct-27-03 08:26 PM
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:kick: I changed the title ..
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Tue Oct-28-03 11:13 PM
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Tue Oct-28-03 11:17 PM
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I wish I had writing talent!
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Wed Oct-29-03 10:34 AM
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Tue Oct-28-03 11:33 PM
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:toast: i love the idea of the extinction of the republican party :toast:
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Tue Oct-28-03 11:42 PM
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| 7. That's Wonderful Trish, Most Excellent !!! |
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:toast:
They do seem to be in convulsive fits lately, no???
:hi:
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Wed Oct-29-03 12:08 AM
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| 8. Thanks WillyT noiretblu and Cheswick |
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Edited on Wed Oct-29-03 12:09 AM by proud patriot
B-) here's to the extinction of the republican party :toast:
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Wed Oct-29-03 11:38 AM
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Wed Oct-29-03 10:38 AM
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Very...um...Ginsbergian! :thumbsup:
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Wed Oct-29-03 11:55 AM
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It is rare that I expose myself by posting my peotry .
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Wed Oct-29-03 01:08 PM
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Wed Oct-29-03 02:07 PM
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| 15. I agree with jiacinto (& that don't happen every day!) ;-) |
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Wed Oct-29-03 03:06 PM
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| 16. Thanks I thought you'd get a kick out of it |
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Wed Oct-29-03 04:34 PM
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VERY nicely done!
I like it!
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Wed Oct-29-03 04:47 PM
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| 18. Comon, don't hold back |
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How do you REALLY feel about them?
Just joshing. Good poem.
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