A Poem by daughter for an English assignment........

[ElsewheresDaughter]

her assignment is to write an 8 lines or more poem and illustrate it.
what did ya think?

Terrorism

As the dust settles to the ground
Pale gray faces all around
Streams of tears run down the faces
So many people from so many places
Lost their lives and their loved ones
By terrorist acts of faceless someones
Questions ring throughout my mind
With answers I may never find
Why the hatred Why the death
I mumble underneath my breath
Will this change the world forever
Or will it bring us closer together
Three years later I'm still confused
About the power that's been abused
Now our bombs drop on innocent people
With devastation and terror just as equal
Ask this Question to yourself
Are we the terrorists or someone else?


my daughter wants you DUers to critique this poem before she hands it in...thanks guys