Reply #6: I was thinking sunrise.

[Ready4Change]

One think I learned in a creative writing class is that, if you write vaguely, people will read into your writing what they want to read. People of a religious/spiritual bent will read their beliefs into the craziest of places. Once I realized one of my teachers was such a person I started getting A's on everything I wrote. All I had to do was mention light or rebirth, etc... and she thought my writing was tapping greater things.

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Honestly, what's wrong with a poem just being about sunrise, the joy of waking early, being inspired by that morning show of color, getting charged up for a new day?