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NightTrain Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:21 PM
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I'm in an underground bunker with several other people. All are...
...dressed in identical one-piece white body suits, and none of them has a face. For some reason, I'm certain that nuclear war has broken out. I ascend a barbed-wire ladder to a hatch on the ceiling. The hatch is made out of a gelatinous substance. I open it and pull myself up. (Despite the barbed-wire ladder, my hands are intact.)

I don't recognize the landscape. It is a dusty plain with used furniture and rusted-out automobiles strewn across it. Several hundred feet away, away, a Boy Scout troop crawls across the plain. Vultures circle overhead. Mushroom clouds bloom in the distance. With perfect calm, I witness the end of the world.

Over the horizon, a thick cloud of black smoke rises. Slowly but perceptibly, it assumes a human form. Frightened, I close the hatch and descend the barbed-wire ladder. But the bunker is gone! I am suspended over a vast orange abyss.

I have three options: let go of the ladder and plunge into the abyss, stay where I am and go nowhere, or climb back up the ladder and face the aforementioned horrors.

I let go of the ladder and plunge into the orange nothingness.
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efhmc Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:28 PM
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1. You should take that creative energy and write a book.
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Dying Eagle Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:29 PM
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2. Deep
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elperromagico Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:30 PM
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3. Yeah, acid's rough the first time.
;)
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aljones Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:32 PM
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4. wasn't that a 1997 movie with Brendon Frazier?
smile ally
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NightTrain Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:34 PM
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5. Actually, it's the transcript of a dream I had in 1992.
Edited on Thu Jun-03-04 09:34 PM by NightTrain
While excavating the apartment for my upcoming move, I came across a large manila envelope that contained a bunch of short stories and vignettes I had written between about 1988 and '93. That dream transcript was among the papers I found.
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aljones Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:38 PM
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7. Very cool, congrats on a great story then!!
smile ally

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the Kelly Gang Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-03-04 09:36 PM
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6. this is disturbing...dreaming of Boy Scouts !
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