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furrylitldevil Donating Member (555 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:34 PM
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A poem for everybody
It's not political at all, just something I wrote because it was what I was feeling at the time. Enjoy, or not.

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Spinning saucers depict sanctity chaos behind angel eyes.
I’m lying in bed next to a primordial soup comprised of 9/10 potential and one part harmony and it’s getting harder and harder to breathe.
Her arms are like music when I wrap myself up in them twice
Fingers interlocking like Vivaldi and Brams being played backwards at half speed
And right now, I’ve never felt more love.

When she moves, she moves with the freedom of a thousand moonbeams
When she laughs, she ignites laugher in me.
Nevermind the bruises
Nevermind the scars
Nevermind the fact that she tiptoes around stars
And pirouettes in ballerina shoes caked with virgin’s blood
All that matters is right now.
Yesterday she was a scared little girl with an iron ball of panic in her belly
Afraid to open her eyes and witness the continuous theft of her most precious childhood
Over
And over
And over again
Tomorrow, she’s an internet porn star looking to reclaim her lost youth through the bed sheets of countless more nameless and faceless abusive father figures
But right now,
Right now we are the only two people in the universe.
If I could, I would take time and flatten it
Extending its borders into infinity and trapping us all inside a perpetual
Right now.

Right now, our love is an indigo sunspot
Right now, we are the gatekeepers of Utopia
Right now, I want to hold her so tight that our atoms fuse together causing a nuclear explosion that will engulf the entire world
Right now she’s looking at me.
She’s staring at me with eyes like a stalled car engine struggling to turn over and I melt.
I melt into my own unidentifiable liquid and mix with her primordial soup creating one free-flowing autonomous being.

Tomorrow is a nightmare not yet lived
Yesterday is already a forgotten dream
All that matters, is right now.
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northofdenali Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:45 PM
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1. I like it. Are you in love?
Poetry is not my forte, but this is beautiful. Thanks for posting.
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furrylitldevil Donating Member (555 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:46 PM
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2. I was
Once upon a time.
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northofdenali Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:49 PM
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3. Ah. "I was"
are two of the saddest words in life. You've done a wonderful tribute, however.
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furrylitldevil Donating Member (555 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:52 PM
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4. Thank you
I'm going to read this at a poetry slam on Sunday. Hopefully the audience will like it as much.
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jus_the_facts Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:54 PM
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5. I enjoyed it a lot.....thank you for sharing.....
....here's one I like...wish I could take credit but alas it's not my own...

Destiny

By Harrison Smith Morris 1899


OUR many years are made of clay and cloud,
And quick desire is but as morning dew;
And love and life, that linger and are proud,
Dissolve and are again the arching blue.

For who shall answer what the ages ask?
Or who undo a one-day-earlier bud?
We are but atoms in the larger task
Of law that seeks not to be understood.

Shall we then gather to our meagre mien
The purple of power, and sit above the seed,
While still abroad the acres of the green
Invisible feet leave imprint of their speed?

We are but part; the whole within the part
Trembles, as heaven steadied in a stream.
Not ours to question whence the leafage start,
Or doubt the prescience of a people’s dream.

For these are cradled in the dark of time,
And move in larger order than we know;
The isolate act interpreted a crime,
In perfect circle, shows the Mind below.

Forth from the hush of equatorial heat
The wiser mother drove her sable kin—
Was it that through our vitiated wheat
A lustier grain should swell the life, grown thin?

Was it that upward through a waste of blood
The brutal tribe should struggle to a soul,—
That white and black, in interchange of good,
Might grope through ages to a loftier whole?

Who knows, who knows? For while we mock with doubt
The ceaseless loom thrids through its slow design; 30
The waning artifice is woven out,
And simple manhood rears a nobler line.

Then wherefore clamor to your idols thus
For bands to hold the Nation from its growth,
And wax in terror at the overplus
Won from dishonor and imperial sloth?

Wherefore implore the Power that lifts our might
To punish what His providence ordains;
To fix our star forever in its night;
To hold us fettered in our ancient chains?

The Nation in God’s garden swells to fruit,
And He is glad, and blesses. Shall we then
Shrink inward to the dulness of the root,
And vanish from the onward march of men?

Give up the lands we won in loyal war;
Give up the gain and glory, rule, renown,
The orient commerce of the open door,
The conquest, and the wide imperial crown?

Yea, were these all, ’t were well to let them go;
For idle gold is but an empty gain:
An empire, reared on ashes of its foe,
Falls, as have fallen the island-walls of Spain.

Treasure is dust. They need it not who build
On better things. Our gain is in the loss:
In love and tears, self victories fulfilled,
In manhood bending to the bitter cross.

In burdens that make wise the bearer, wounds
Taken in hate that sanctify the heart,
In sympathies and sorrows, and in sounds
That up from all the open waters start;

In brotherhood that binds the broken ties
And clasps the whole world closer into peace;
In East and West enwoven loverwise,
Mated for happy arts and home’s increase.

What though the sere leaf circle to the ground,—
Its summer task is done, the bough is clean
For Spring’s ascent; the lost is later found
In some new recess of the risen green.

We are but Nature’s menials. ’T is her might
Sets our strange feet on Australasian sands,
Bids us to pluck the races from their night
And build a State from out the brawling bands.

Serene, she sweeps aside the more or less,
The man or people, if her end be sure;
Her brooding eyes, that ever bend to bless,
Find guerdon for the dead that shall endure.

Truth marches on, though crafty ignorance
Heed not the footfall of the eternal tread.
The land that shrinks from Nature’s armed advance
Shall lie dishonored with her wasted dead.

Yea, it behooves us that the light be free.
We are but bearers,—it is Nature’s own,—
Runners who speed the way of Destiny,
Yielding the torch whose flame is forward blown.

We are in His wide grasp who holds the law,
Who heaves the tidal sea, and rounds the year;
We may return not, though the weak withdraw;
We must move onward to the last frontier.

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furrylitldevil Donating Member (555 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 10:59 PM
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6. Wow, that was powerful
The imagery is undeniable in that piece. Very nice indeed.
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jus_the_facts Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 11:11 PM
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7. Glad you thought so too.....
....poetry always gives food for thought and a peace in the soul...at least it does for me. :pals:
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kimchi Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Jun-17-04 11:19 PM
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8. Enjoyed it!
I especially liked the ties to cosmic events. Thanks for sharing a piece of yourself. And for inspiring me to write a little somethin' myself!
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jus_the_facts Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-18-04 12:30 AM
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9. a kick...for the soul.....
:)
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Magical Donating Member (336 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-18-04 12:58 AM
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10. Bravo...
Tremendous writing ... thanks.
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rumguy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jun-18-04 01:06 AM
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11. well done
I enjoyed it...

It flows. It keeps the interest.
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