Finish the Poem

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Twila is my favorite girl
I like to take her hair and twirl
born inside a temporary swirl
She's the one for me!

[LearnedHand]

1. Um, finish what part of it?

n/t

[listenup]

2. finish the best part

the part inside your heart.

[SiobhanClancy]

3. Hmm..

I'd like to take her to the fair
Or save her from the lion's lair
going in on a dare
Keeping her for me!

We could walk beside the sea
Or build a home high in a tree
I can see her making tea
Staying there with me!

But I can't tell her any of this
Or of her hair I'd like to kiss
this sight I cannot miss
Waving goodbye to me!

[listenup]

4. okay,

you definitely get a silver star for that!

[Algorem]

5. Dress-ed up just like Milton Berle

Hung like a horse and wigs of curls She's my uncle we're very rural Tweedly freakin dee!

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6. Genius is sometimes unrecognized

sometimes for good reason, sometimes for no reason.

[Algorem]

10. Thank you.I don't write much poetry,so I like to stick to the strictly

autobiographical stuff.Still,I feel like I might have prettied it up a little too much.

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11. terse is good

maybe?

[mykpart]

7. If Twila were a guy I'd be

Into homosexuality.

[listenup]

8. sexuality has nothing to do with sensuality

i've heard that Twila could be or would be
what he or she should be
okay?

[Duncan Grant]

9. Tag, you're it.

t'ween coastal beaches we have sailed,
blue waters breath -- released, unveiled.
Isolation ends; passions unjailed.
She's the one for me!