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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 06:25 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 4/6/2009)
Hurricane Walk

It was better than sex, the way it relaxed me.
My thighs throbbed for ours, each finger
seemed limp. I lighted
a cigarette, then found it too heavy to lift.

A more comfortable lust would have kept me
inside. Yet I wanted
the wind’s touch, to feel its whorled force.
I stood on a bridge, there were no trees

to stop it — I saw thin sheets of water
spin like ghosts from the Charles.
And now, damp from a bath, I feel
honed, quite essential.

This robe seems too big, it abrades
my cleansed skin. The room’s warmth
stings my lips; they were left raw and chapped,
almost bruised. It will take days

to heal them, the slightest good-night kiss
is out of the question for weeks.

Diann Blakely

**************

:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 06:53 AM
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1. Morning Retro!
:hi:


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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 07:01 AM
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3. Morning
:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 06:58 AM
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2. Morning!
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 07:01 AM
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4. Morning!
:hi:

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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 08:28 AM
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5. ...
:D :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 04:52 PM
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8. ...
:hi:

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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 08:30 AM
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6. ~
:donut: :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 04:52 PM
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9. ...
:hi:

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 11:17 AM
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7. My dear Retro!
Ah, beautiful!

Pretty racy for a Monday...;)

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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 04:52 PM
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:hi:

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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 06:21 PM
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11. Now that's interesting. nt
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-06-09 08:40 PM
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:hi:

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