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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 06:55 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Thu 4/23/2009)
The Irony of the Small Horn

Paul says the Great American Music Hall
should be called The Great European Music Hall.

Its gold flourishes and imperial balcony feel more
like something you'd yearn for from across the ocean.

Nothing is named right in this world.
I don't know what to call Paul's body against mine.

Dancing, maybe, but that's not enough.
It's more like a question before it is born

gathering force among the margins
of what is already known or believed.

Paul has his hand on my stomach where my shirt rides up
and I press into the beat coming through his chest.

My hips rotate with the room. Singular surrenders to plural.
Sweat and smoke and beer and bodies pulse in the darkness.

The music is a fire. Dancing is the flame.
We all depend on each other to burn.

Paul points out the enormous man playing the tiny trumpet.
All the big guys have small horns, we agree.

This poem was supposed to be about that. About the trumpet,
because that was how Paul and I planned it.

But nothing ever turns out the way you think it will.
The music ends, and then it's time to go home.

Sage Cohen

**************

:hi:

RL
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blueraven95 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 06:59 AM
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1. Good Morning, Retro
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 07:11 AM
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2. Good Morning!
:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 08:19 AM
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3. ...
:thumbsup:

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 05:11 PM
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7. Hello...
Edited on Thu Apr-23-09 05:12 PM by RetroLounge
and the fact that my name is Paul had nothing to do with me picking this one... :9

:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 06:29 PM
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11. D'oh!
I'm so dense. :dunce:
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 08:23 AM
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4. --
:donut: :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 05:11 PM
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8. ...
:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 12:50 PM
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5. My dear Retro...
YES.

Wow.

Thanks!

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 05:11 PM
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9. ...
:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 03:51 PM
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6. "We all depend on each other to burn."
Is such a great line.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-23-09 05:12 PM
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10. Yeah, loved this poem
:hi:

RL
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