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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-29-09 06:17 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 4/29/09
"Twin"

The incubator
was not lens enough
to show me where you flew,
out of the doctor's fingers,

out of the air's restraint.
And all their mirrors
could not lure your breath.
You were the part of me

that gave itself to death.
Sometimes I dream of eyes,
sealed with a membrane
of unknowing

like a mystic's veil,
that open to my glance
without surprise.
Sometimes I dream

of perfect understanding.
Sometimes I snatch
at hands that seem to seek
as through a caul.

Sometimes I waken
With an infant's shriek.

~Mary Rose O'Reilley
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-29-09 06:47 AM
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1. nice
Sometimes I waken
With an infant's shriek.


:hi:

RL
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-29-09 05:41 PM
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3. Her book, "Half Wild," is easily the best thing I've read this year. nt
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-29-09 05:28 PM
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2. My dear BlueIris...
Wow...how poignant.

You were the part of me

that gave itself to death.


Really lovely.

Thank you...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-29-09 09:17 PM
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4. Kick, for the evening crowd. nt
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