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lame54 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Dec-13-07 11:32 AM
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Your feedback would be much appreciated
i was asked by a freind to make an ad for his websites
http://youtube.com/watch?v=j_jTQIDW9Qg
please view and let me know what you think
is it clear?
room for improvement?
did you want to go to the sites?
etc.
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CherokeeDem Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Dec-13-07 11:42 AM
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1. I Loved It
Very crisp, held my attention, and did make me want to check out the websites. One little thing, I think you could leave off Uncle Sam after the last website rolls up...reduced the impact of the message for me and seems a bit distracting from the website addresses.

Otherwise, really good.
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madokie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Dec-13-07 11:44 AM
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2. look good to me
direct and to the point.
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