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Dyedinthewoolliberal

(15,560 posts) Tue Nov 24, 2020, 12:11 PM Nov 2020

A Haiku

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A Haiku (Original Post) Dyedinthewoolliberal Nov 2020 OP

Transcendent! Karadeniz Nov 2020 #1

Over, decided, kaput unblock Nov 2020 #2

Agree. Too many syllables with 'and.' Correct premise, I hope. Shrike47 Nov 2020 #3

Crap! Dyedinthewoolliberal Nov 2020 #5

Could we lose the "green screen" maybe? Backseat Driver Nov 2020 #4

If you are asking can I recreate this in a color you like? Dyedinthewoolliberal Nov 2020 #6

something like this? Dyedinthewoolliberal Nov 2020 #9

Yes! Thank you so much! Backseat Driver Nov 2020 #10

-- oh! :) Like it as is. But could also do Hortensis Nov 2020 #7

Perfect! Dyedinthewoolliberal Nov 2020 #8

Karadeniz

(22,486 posts)

1. Transcendent!

Reply to Dyedinthewoolliberal (Original post)

Tue Nov 24, 2020, 12:12 PM

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unblock

(52,164 posts)

2. Over, decided, kaput

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Tue Nov 24, 2020, 12:13 PM

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Shrike47

(6,913 posts)

3. Agree. Too many syllables with 'and.' Correct premise, I hope.

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Tue Nov 24, 2020, 12:24 PM

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Dyedinthewoolliberal

(15,560 posts)

5. Crap!

Reply to Shrike47 (Reply #3)

Tue Nov 24, 2020, 05:32 PM

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I counted and counted Easy fix. Later

Backseat Driver

(4,385 posts)

4. Could we lose the "green screen" maybe?

Reply to unblock (Reply #2)

Tue Nov 24, 2020, 01:08 PM

Nov 2020

I'd hang it on the wall for personal "fair use" satisfaction, but it doesn't match my sofa, I can't do digital manipulation, and there are questions I just won't be able to simply answer (without shaking my head) in spite of the fact that no one is currently allowed to visit and see it where and how it hangs. Just wanted you to know, the sentiment itself is so very comfortable "and" I wouldn't then mind so much that small humble, I think, imperfection in poetic syllabic form. PS: Fall gem tones are my favorites!