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salmannaseem07

(399 posts) Fri Apr 6, 2018, 04:28 PM Apr 2018

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Every Round Things in not a Football

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Every Round Things in not a Football (Original Post) salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 OP

Need your feedback salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #1

the music sounds very Steely Dan-ish gay texan Apr 2018 #2

Thanks salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #3

I didn't get it, but good animmation work. nt Ferrets are Cool Apr 2018 #4

Thanks salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #7

I like it! Locrian Apr 2018 #5

Thanks salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #6

and you could edit the headline for understandability. demigoddess Apr 2018 #8

Won't understand salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #10

Is it Jean-Luc Picard turning into a bee and kicking a pilot in the head? LastLiberal in PalmSprings Apr 2018 #9

Never, Jean-Luc Picard great man salmannaseem07 Apr 2018 #11

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

1. Need your feedback

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Fri Apr 6, 2018, 06:10 PM

Apr 2018

Just a short Animated film made after impressing from kick hobbit few people have. C & C are welcome

gay texan

(3,107 posts)

2. the music sounds very Steely Dan-ish

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Reply #1)

Fri Apr 6, 2018, 08:48 PM

Apr 2018

interesting animation

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

3. Thanks

Reply to gay texan (Reply #2)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 04:42 AM

Apr 2018

Music was taken from YouTube Creator studio

Ferrets are Cool

(22,461 posts)

4. I didn't get it, but good animmation work. nt

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 11:02 AM

Apr 2018

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

7. Thanks

Reply to Ferrets are Cool (Reply #4)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 04:20 PM

Apr 2018

Locrian

(4,523 posts)

5. I like it!

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 11:14 AM

Apr 2018

Cool music and animation - love it

These are just my uneducated comments
the audio needs a little mixing - the kick and beep vol are too high and the end Hmmm... is a little to "forward"
Not much on the kick and beep - I know they're supposed to be jarring - but they need a little more integration into the mix.

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

6. Thanks

Reply to Locrian (Reply #5)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 04:20 PM

Apr 2018

Thank you so much for such piece of advice and feedback
thats make my day 😍

demigoddess

(6,675 posts)

8. and you could edit the headline for understandability.

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 04:33 PM

Apr 2018

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

10. Won't understand

Reply to demigoddess (Reply #8)

Mon Apr 9, 2018, 04:39 AM

Apr 2018

Please elebrate little

LastLiberal in PalmSprings

(13,280 posts)

9. Is it Jean-Luc Picard turning into a bee and kicking a pilot in the head?

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Sat Apr 7, 2018, 06:39 PM

Apr 2018

Or are my drugs wearing off?

salmannaseem07

(399 posts)

11. Never, Jean-Luc Picard great man

Reply to salmannaseem07 (Original post)

Mon Apr 9, 2018, 04:44 AM

Apr 2018

Just a random human head with out hairs and he is not pilot, just resting in plane decoration on road

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