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UTUSN

(70,686 posts)
Wed Feb 5, 2020, 10:32 PM Feb 2020

Any songwriters out there? We can make a mint but you gotta cut me in!1

I think it's "Country" despite I'm not Country. Here's the kernel:

"You're Welcome. There's Nobody Here, Either"

What the story line is: This hot barmaid, also super nice, knows it all, friendly with ex-es including biker. Problem, she's friendly one week and cold the next. So this was an "off" week. 4 hours of her ignoring, she tells new arrival customers, there's nobody here (stools next to me). (She never said, this week, thank-you in 4 hours.) So at my exit I say, "You're welcome. There's nobody here, either."

**********We've got a HIT, people!1 Despite my not being a lyrics-driven type. Remember, MELODY *rules*!1









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Any songwriters out there? We can make a mint but you gotta cut me in!1 (Original Post) UTUSN Feb 2020 OP
Here's a title for another one: You're Just a Bartender, I'm Just Your Customer UTUSN Feb 2020 #1

UTUSN

(70,686 posts)
1. Here's a title for another one: You're Just a Bartender, I'm Just Your Customer
Wed Feb 5, 2020, 10:52 PM
Feb 2020

Hey!1 It's better than "Symphony No. 7" - Ludwig!1






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