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Hi all, and thanks for considering my English composition question. I have been out of school a long time and my knowledge of the written English rules is foggy, at best.
My question: When you are writing (or typing) a greeting to someone (say, in a novel or even in a letter or email to a friend), which forms are permissible ?
A- "Hello John", "Hello Susan"
B- "Hello, John", "Hello, Susan" (note the usage of the comma)
or
C- both of the above ? I typically use option A but I do not know the rules.
The reason why I ask is, in a game I play, a Dutch woman habitually addresses people by option B. I have no idea what the rules are in the Netherlands. Just asking what the English rules are, if it even matters.
Thank you kindly for your attention to this!
Steve
C_U_L8R
(44,992 posts)"I already ate Susan" and "I already ate, Susan."
patricia92243
(12,592 posts)tblue37
(65,227 posts)Vinnie From Indy
(10,820 posts)hlthe2b
(102,141 posts)their omission where they are clearly needed, and not so much on their extraneous use that might be technically incorrect.
Of course, that ignores the issue/rule of including the comma WITHIN the quotation marks. I haven't seen too many mention that (and frankly, while I do, it doesn't bother me either way).
AnnaLee
(1,035 posts)I still overuse commas but I was taught to use them sparingly when required for clarity.
Cirque du So-What
(25,908 posts)Lets eat, Grandma!
Vs
Lets eat Grandma!
soothsayer
(38,601 posts)Croney
(4,657 posts)Hello darkness, my old friend.
That looks better than hello, darkness my old friend.
Laelth
(32,017 posts)-Laelth
Doodley
(9,048 posts)paragraph when a new person speaks. Example:
PARAGRAPH "Hello John," said Susan.
PARAGRAPH "Pleased to meet you again!" said John.
However, in a novel. you would normally avoid these types of introductory conversations as they aren't interesting.
PS. You don't put comma before the name, if it isn't needed for clarity.
raccoon
(31,105 posts)I would like to thank my parents, mother Theresa and the pope.
JT45242
(2,251 posts)There have been lawsuits that the Oxford comma was used to delineate exactly what was meant.
For precision, use the comma.
For more realistic looking dialogue in a novel or play, you may omit to indicate that in normal conversation there is no pause.
Cirque du So-What
(25,908 posts)abqtommy
(14,118 posts)language/punctuation rules. I still use what I can to achieve clarity of thought and presentation but
I generally understand what anybody does...
The Velveteen Ocelot
(115,610 posts)B is more correct, but A seems to have become more common. Commas are placed for clarity, and the salutation is clear either way.
The panda eats shoots and leaves.
The panda eats, shoots, and leaves.