Welcome to DU! The truly grassroots left-of-center political community where regular people, not algorithms, drive the discussions and set the standards. Join the community: Create a free account Support DU (and get rid of ads!): Become a Star Member Latest Breaking News General Discussion The DU Lounge All Forums Issue Forums Culture Forums Alliance Forums Region Forums Support Forums Help & Search

rbnyc

(17,045 posts)
Sun May 13, 2012, 09:33 PM May 2012

A new song...

...it's been a long time since I wrote anything new.



The Shade

I miss you again.
Don't know
how you got so burried.
This is where I fail.

I selpt though it again.
Don't know
how you got so married.
This is where I fell.

The sun wove the shade.
The sun dove around a decade.
Our son said, "Please dream-catcher, let the good dreams flow."

I hope I see you again.
I hope I see.
2 replies = new reply since forum marked as read
Highlight: NoneDon't highlight anything 5 newestHighlight 5 most recent replies
A new song... (Original Post) rbnyc May 2012 OP
cool sound SoFlaJet May 2012 #1
Thanks so much for listening... rbnyc May 2012 #2

SoFlaJet

(7,767 posts)
1. cool sound
Sun May 20, 2012, 08:34 AM
May 2012

my only advice would be (if I was asked) would be to cut the intro down a few bars and get to the singing sooner-otherwise-i like it

Latest Discussions»Culture Forums»Musicians»A new song...