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hermetic

(8,308 posts)
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 12:05 PM Nov 2020

Try this? When you finish a book

go back and reread the first paragraph. Look for the ways in which it predicted the rest of the text or, in the most skillful cases, taught us to read it. This is the advice from an article called A Close Reading of the Best Opening Paragraph of All Time.

That paragraph is from Shirley Jackson’s We Have Always Lived in the Castle.

My name is Mary Katherine Blackwood. I am eighteen years old, and I live with my sister Constance. I have often thought that with any luck at all I could have been born a werewolf, because the two middle fingers on both my hands are the same length, but I have had to be content with what I had. I dislike washing myself, and dogs, and noise. I like my sister Constance, and Richard Plantagenet, and Amanita phalloides, the death-cup mushroom. Everyone else in my family is dead.


I’m not sure I agree it’s the best paragraph ever but I did read that book over 50 years ago and still remember that I thought it was great (the book).

Anyway, I found this to be an interesting article about reading so I wanted to share it with you.
https://getpocket.com/explore/item/a-close-reading-of-the-best-opening-paragraph-of-all-time?utm_source=pocket-newtab
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Try this? When you finish a book (Original Post) hermetic Nov 2020 OP
I have a frustrating problem cilla4progress Nov 2020 #1
I do that, too hermetic Nov 2020 #2
Same here, but birdographer Dec 2020 #17
Thanks for the tip - cilla4progress Dec 2020 #19
I love that site birdographer Dec 2020 #20
Wow - cilla4progress Dec 2020 #21
Ty for sharing about Library Thing! SheltieLover Jan 2021 #23
My catalog is at birdographer Jan 2021 #24
Ty! SheltieLover Jan 2021 #25
I have Mac laptop birdographer Jan 2021 #26
I'm in SheltieLover Jan 2021 #27
OK on my front page of a random person birdographer Jan 2021 #28
Yaaaaaay! SheltieLover Jan 2021 #29
Done! SheltieLover Jan 2021 #30
Wonderful article! MontanaMama Nov 2020 #3
Hi! hermetic Nov 2020 #7
there's also a new movie about Shirley Jackson NJCher Nov 2020 #14
Oh cool! hermetic Nov 2020 #16
Great idea MyMission Nov 2020 #4
I often reread my favorite books Oldem Dec 2020 #18
Yes, this sounds like a fun practice! cilla4progress Nov 2020 #5
I found it in PDF form hermetic Nov 2020 #8
when I did my fall literature syllabi NJCher Nov 2020 #15
Interesting dweller Nov 2020 #6
Love Garp! hermetic Nov 2020 #9
Irving once said in an interview dweller Nov 2020 #10
Only takes a minute and you have already invested much more time in the book. keithbvadu2 Nov 2020 #11
Exactly hermetic Nov 2020 #12
Big John Irving fan here, too! cilla4progress Nov 2020 #13
An assignment in a creative writing class I once took was to share the opening paragraph PoindexterOglethorpe Dec 2020 #22

cilla4progress

(24,728 posts)
1. I have a frustrating problem
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 12:33 PM
Nov 2020

With forgetting much of the book, and this happens with films as well. I get so caught up in the moment, the writing, and so emotional in a sense, I lose the arc.

I've often thought of writing my own summary, or simply rereading them.

hermetic

(8,308 posts)
2. I do that, too
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 12:44 PM
Nov 2020

With a lot of books. Sometimes, though, one will really stay with me. Shirley Jackson's books were good that way.

I think writing your own summary is a great idea. I keep a list of titles now but once in a while have to look them up to refresh my memory of the plot.

I plan to try doing what this article suggests, just to see if it makes any sort of difference for me. It's like the most challenging thing suggested to me in months so I might as well. If ya know what I mean...

birdographer

(1,325 posts)
17. Same here, but
Sat Dec 5, 2020, 03:26 PM
Dec 2020

it does mean I can re-read books and not feel like I know every word. I'm so glad Amazon tells you when you have already bought a book, otherwise I would have a lot of duplicates. I catalog them on Library Thing with review stars and sometimes a note, just to keep track of books I have read!

birdographer

(1,325 posts)
20. I love that site
Sat Dec 5, 2020, 09:38 PM
Dec 2020

You can link up with others who like the same books you do, and they are a source for recommendations. It's a cool site, lots to explore.

birdographer

(1,325 posts)
26. I have Mac laptop
Sat Jan 2, 2021, 08:57 PM
Jan 2021

I have never tried to access it from an iPad, though... (or any other tablet). I hope you can get in.

SheltieLover

(57,073 posts)
27. I'm in
Sat Jan 2, 2021, 09:33 PM
Jan 2021

But navigating is difficult.

Can I, for instance, make your site a favorite? I don't see a way to do so.

birdographer

(1,325 posts)
28. OK on my front page of a random person
Sat Jan 2, 2021, 10:36 PM
Jan 2021

over to the right there is a "add to " option, which includes Friends and other things. If that is there, you can add me, I guess as a friend, and when I get the notification, I can also add you. Let's try it!

SheltieLover

(57,073 posts)
30. Done!
Sat Jan 2, 2021, 10:45 PM
Jan 2021

Yaaaaay!

I love reading & share your stated practice of stopping when the work is intolerable, no matter where you are in the book. Lol

Ty so much again!

See you at the library!

MontanaMama

(23,313 posts)
3. Wonderful article!
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 12:55 PM
Nov 2020

I’ve always been a first paragraph snob in that if it really hooks me, I’ll probably buy the book but I never thought to go back to that first paragraph to see what if anything it might have foretold about the characters and plot of the story. Fascinating. I think I should read Shirley Jackson’s book so I can know more about Mary Katherine Blackwood.

hermetic

(8,308 posts)
7. Hi!
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:41 PM
Nov 2020

This book is easy to find online. I just got a PDF copy and started reading it. It really grabs you. It's also kind of funny and especially now if you imagine all the towns folk are repugs.

MyMission

(1,850 posts)
4. Great idea
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:13 PM
Nov 2020

I often reread a book after the first read. Always pick up new things.

But rereading the beginning, specifically to see if or how there is foreshadowing, can be another fun thing about reading!

Thanks for the post.

Oldem

(833 posts)
18. I often reread my favorite books
Sat Dec 5, 2020, 05:47 PM
Dec 2020

after years--sometimes many years--have passed. I'm a different person, then, than I was when I first read it. Sometimes I'm amazed that I remember little or nothing about it. Sometimes I remember much of it and delight in the second (or third) reading, anyway. I'm saving a reread of Walker Percy's The Second Coming for a special time.

cilla4progress

(24,728 posts)
5. Yes, this sounds like a fun practice!
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:24 PM
Nov 2020

Thanks for the Shirley Jackson rec. I'm only familiar with her great classic The Lottery.

[Shaking in my boots!]

hermetic

(8,308 posts)
8. I found it in PDF form
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:44 PM
Nov 2020

and just started reading it. It does have some things in common with The Lottery. I think The Haunting of Hill House is the scariest story I ever read. It actually gave me chill bumps.

NJCher

(35,661 posts)
15. when I did my fall literature syllabi
Sun Nov 22, 2020, 11:46 AM
Nov 2020

That story would always be read around Halloween time.

It is just so, so disturbing.

hermetic

(8,308 posts)
9. Love Garp!
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:50 PM
Nov 2020

And The Hotel New Hampshire. Yeah, some books might just be a little TOO detailed to pull that off. I do know that the first paragraph needs to have a lot of clout, though. "It was a dark and stormy night" just doesn't cut it anymore.

dweller

(23,629 posts)
10. Irving once said in an interview
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:53 PM
Nov 2020

He wrote the ending first, then the rest to end up there ...

🤔

✌🏻

keithbvadu2

(36,787 posts)
11. Only takes a minute and you have already invested much more time in the book.
Sat Nov 21, 2020, 01:55 PM
Nov 2020

Only takes a minute and you have already invested much more time in the book.

PoindexterOglethorpe

(25,853 posts)
22. An assignment in a creative writing class I once took was to share the opening paragraph
Wed Dec 9, 2020, 01:25 AM
Dec 2020

of a novel we liked.

That was the one I shared.

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