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A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you. (Original Post) Harker Nov 2020 OP
Lovely MLAA Nov 2020 #1
They'll be back Harker Nov 2020 #2
You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂 MLAA Nov 2020 #3
You're very kind to say so. Thank you. Harker Nov 2020 #4
so ... lillypaddle Nov 2020 #5
A Luna lune... love it! Harker Nov 2020 #6
You do your research lillypaddle Nov 2020 #8
I'm not sure. Harker Nov 2020 #9
I have to think about that one lillypaddle Nov 2020 #10
And... Harker Nov 2020 #7

Harker

(13,872 posts)
4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:42 AM
Nov 2020

Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.

lillypaddle

(9,580 posts)
5. so ...
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:15 PM
Nov 2020

moon shimmers

the light is still there

though shadowed

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It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines.

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