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Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:17 AM

A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you.

no fun here

the woods are silent

crows move on

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Reply A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you. (Original post)
Harker Nov 2020 OP
MLAA Nov 2020 #1
Harker Nov 2020 #2
MLAA Nov 2020 #3
Harker Nov 2020 #4
lillypaddle Nov 2020 #5
Harker Nov 2020 #6
lillypaddle Nov 2020 #8
Harker Nov 2020 #9
lillypaddle Nov 2020 #10
Harker Nov 2020 #7

Response to Harker (Original post)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:26 AM

1. Lovely

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Response to MLAA (Reply #1)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:31 AM

2. They'll be back

when the snow tails off a bit and the wind dies down.



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Response to Harker (Reply #2)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:33 AM

3. You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂

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Response to MLAA (Reply #3)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:42 AM

4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.

Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.

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Response to Harker (Original post)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:15 PM

5. so ...

moon shimmers

the light is still there

though shadowed

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It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines.

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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #5)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:21 PM

6. A Luna lune... love it!

Keep it up, sensei, and you'll be thinking them with little or no effort.

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Response to Harker (Reply #6)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:31 PM

8. You do your research

and send me to google.

Wonder what that would be called?

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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #8)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:49 PM

9. I'm not sure.

sunflower

now dried out and black

birdfeeder

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Response to Harker (Reply #9)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 02:00 PM

10. I have to think about that one

for awhile.

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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #5)

Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:26 PM

7. And...

brief cloud gaps

shadows are reborn

glare off snow

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