Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:17 AM
Harker (10,536 posts)
A very short poem sometimes called a lune for you.
no fun here
the woods are silent crows move on
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10 replies, 764 views
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Harker | Nov 2020 | OP |
MLAA | Nov 2020 | #1 | |
Harker | Nov 2020 | #2 | |
MLAA | Nov 2020 | #3 | |
Harker | Nov 2020 | #4 | |
lillypaddle | Nov 2020 | #5 | |
Harker | Nov 2020 | #6 | |
lillypaddle | Nov 2020 | #8 | |
Harker | Nov 2020 | #9 | |
lillypaddle | Nov 2020 | #10 | |
Harker | Nov 2020 | #7 |
Response to MLAA (Reply #1)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:31 AM
Harker (10,536 posts)
2. They'll be back
when the snow tails off a bit and the wind dies down.
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Response to Harker (Reply #2)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:33 AM
MLAA (11,120 posts)
3. You really used your few words well in the lune. It really hit me as just lovely. 🙂
Response to MLAA (Reply #3)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 11:42 AM
Harker (10,536 posts)
4. You're very kind to say so. Thank you.
Rather than viewing the form as limiting, I find the distillation process to broaden my way of experiencing the world.
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Response to Harker (Original post)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:15 PM
lillypaddle (9,318 posts)
5. so ...
moon shimmers
the light is still there though shadowed ------------------------------------------ It's much harder than I thought to write a lune. Too many thoughts, not enough syllables or lines. ![]() |
Response to lillypaddle (Reply #5)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:21 PM
Harker (10,536 posts)
6. A Luna lune... love it!
Keep it up, sensei, and you'll be thinking them with little or no effort.
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Response to Harker (Reply #6)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:31 PM
lillypaddle (9,318 posts)
8. You do your research
and send me to google.
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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #8)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:49 PM
Harker (10,536 posts)
9. I'm not sure.
sunflower
now dried out and black birdfeeder |
Response to Harker (Reply #9)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 02:00 PM
lillypaddle (9,318 posts)
10. I have to think about that one
for awhile.
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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #5)
Mon Nov 2, 2020, 01:26 PM
Harker (10,536 posts)
7. And...
brief cloud gaps
shadows are reborn glare off snow |