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Harker
Nov 2020
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CaliforniaPeggy
(149,588 posts)1. I like this!
I've reversed it to show the possibilities. Let me know what you think. I learned this option in a workshop and it's an interesting way to see what happens when you use it.
chickadee
a frozen moment
slowing snow
Harker
(14,012 posts)2. I'm glad you did that.
It adds a lot to the value of a little poem to view the lines as floating images in that way.
Play is good! So is flexibility.
Thanks...
CaliforniaPeggy
(149,588 posts)3. You're most welcome!
Star-Thrower
(309 posts)4. Interesting
leaving the reader to wonder.
Harker
(14,012 posts)5. I'm vague by nature
so I'm pretty comfortable with the format.