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Tue Nov 17, 2020, 01:23 PM

Just then...

slowing snow

a frozen moment

chickadee

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Harker Nov 2020 OP
CaliforniaPeggy Nov 2020 #1
Harker Nov 2020 #2
CaliforniaPeggy Nov 2020 #3
Star-Thrower Nov 2020 #4
Harker Nov 2020 #5

Response to Harker (Original post)

Thu Nov 19, 2020, 02:24 PM

1. I like this!

I've reversed it to show the possibilities. Let me know what you think. I learned this option in a workshop and it's an interesting way to see what happens when you use it.


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a frozen moment

slowing snow

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Response to CaliforniaPeggy (Reply #1)

Thu Nov 19, 2020, 03:41 PM

2. I'm glad you did that.

It adds a lot to the value of a little poem to view the lines as floating images in that way.

Play is good! So is flexibility.

Thanks...

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Response to Harker (Reply #2)

Thu Nov 19, 2020, 04:18 PM

3. You're most welcome!

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Response to Harker (Original post)

Thu Nov 19, 2020, 08:44 PM

4. Interesting

leaving the reader to wonder.

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Response to Star-Thrower (Reply #4)

Thu Nov 19, 2020, 10:54 PM

5. I'm vague by nature

so I'm pretty comfortable with the format.

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