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Just then... (Original Post) Harker Nov 2020 OP
I like this! CaliforniaPeggy Nov 2020 #1
I'm glad you did that. Harker Nov 2020 #2
You're most welcome! CaliforniaPeggy Nov 2020 #3
Interesting Star-Thrower Nov 2020 #4
I'm vague by nature Harker Nov 2020 #5

CaliforniaPeggy

(149,460 posts)
1. I like this!
Thu Nov 19, 2020, 02:24 PM
Nov 2020

I've reversed it to show the possibilities. Let me know what you think. I learned this option in a workshop and it's an interesting way to see what happens when you use it.


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Harker

(13,938 posts)
2. I'm glad you did that.
Thu Nov 19, 2020, 03:41 PM
Nov 2020

It adds a lot to the value of a little poem to view the lines as floating images in that way.

Play is good! So is flexibility.

Thanks...

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