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Mon Jul 26, 2021, 12:16 PM

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summer moon

tainted with beauty

distant fires

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Harker Jul 2021 OP
lillypaddle Jul 2021 #1
Harker Jul 2021 #2
lillypaddle Jul 2021 #3

Response to Harker (Original post)

Tue Jul 27, 2021, 02:58 AM

1. I love that you leave so much

to the reader's imagination. Subtlety and brevity, but so much unsaid.

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Response to lillypaddle (Reply #1)

Tue Jul 27, 2021, 08:42 AM

2. Thanks... I enjoy the limitations of the structure.

Sometimes I'll need to whittle down a larger twig, though time and practice have led me to think in that form.

expansive

the box has no lid

or bottom

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Response to Harker (Reply #2)

Tue Jul 27, 2021, 12:39 PM

3. I see what you did there!

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