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10. I see what you mean - when you leave off the headline, it reads quite differently.

Tue Nov 2, 2021, 08:50 AM

Nov 2021

The post requires the reader to hold onto that Trump pronoun through a whole paragraph. Could definitely have been written more clearly.

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? I don't see that in the OP. lagomorph777 Nov 2021 #4

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