Not just talk... not just try.... do.

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5. I'm sorry... most were grammar mistakes I made....

I was like writing this thing stream of thought...

Then when I reread it, I would find that I problems like this:

* verb/noun agreement errors
* verb/quantity agreement errors
* verb conjugations changing in the middle of compound sentences
* missing articles (eg. a, an, the, those, ... etc)
* missing prepositions
* in the beginning I had not used bold and such correctly... and I had no idea that "excerpt" could make things easier to see with color (sorry, I'm still learning).
* and one embarrassing use of a cuss word (my uncle is a Christian and took me to task over that)
* And finally, the last edit was to mention this thing I just learned about called a "KICK".

And sorry I didn't update the explanations sections as I fixed it.

Honestly, if you really did get a good feeling after reading the whole post, I would really appreciate it if you could "KICK" it, please.