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In reply to the discussion: Deputies shoot man in his front yard He was getting cigarette out of his mother's car [View all]Boom Sound 416
(4,185 posts)and I'm not condemning the industry
but, the story completely relates Middleton's account. It does so as fact with no ambiguity. The reader knows what, when and why he was at his car. It makes no issue to dispute his claim, it asks no follow ups. If the police refuse comment, fine. Do they hold the story over that? No. Fine.
Then theirs this:
"The neighborhood where Middleton lives was quiet Saturday afternoon, and there was no evidence the shooting had even occurred. However, neighbors said only a few hours earlier the area had been congested with law enforcement vehicles and yellow crime scene tape."
There is a lot of missing info here. Why didn't anyone contact the neighbor who called 911. If they did, why is their no mention. Or why was it left out. Where is the 911 audio. Who else was home. Is that Mr. Middleton's home.
Maybe its not out and out stoking a fire, but at least very leasts its incomplete work. But frankly its shoddy. It also shows no sensitively towards the issues for which the state and country are reeling. They needed to be extra diligent to get it right and not to stoke something that isn't their. At very least a complete job could discover if it there at all.
I should be more articulate, but I hope you understand me