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1monster

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18. I was standing there on that retaining wall right along with you as I read what you wrote.

Sat Jun 6, 2015, 01:19 PM

Jun 2015

That is a real gift as a writer, one that I wish I could learn.

If you are not writing professionally for publication, you should. You have a gift of story telling that needs to be shared.

BTW, congratulations to you and your daughter. As parents, we want to give our children every advantage, to smooth the way for them. But, more and more, I'm learning, that it is probably better for them to face adversity as they are growing and maturing, than to face it for the first time as young (or not so young) adults.

Your children are doing great. You did good.

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