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3catwoman3

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5. The first sentence of the second paragraph...

Reply to Botany (Original post)

Mon May 22, 2017, 09:38 AM

May 2017

...could be a lot shorter.

Instead of "Trump reportedly went into his post-election meeting with Obama unaware that the entire presidential staff working in the West Wing had to be replaced”, it could just be "Trump went into his post-election meeting with Obama unaware."

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