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Tobin S.

(10,420 posts)
1. OK
Fri Jan 23, 2015, 01:52 PM
Jan 2015

"Pets enhance the quality of life of many people, and I think that the addition of pets to our community will not only be beneficial to the pet owners, but also to the community as a whole. It will make our community more vibrant and more attractive to home buyers, possibly increasing the value of our condos and making them easier to sell when it is time to move on."

There are a couple of sentences for you.

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OK Tobin S. Jan 2015 #1
Thank you. I think is perfect. diabeticman Jan 2015 #3
EDIT, for clarity: elleng Jan 2015 #2
thank you Elleng I will show this to my wife. diabeticman Jan 2015 #4
You're welcome. elleng Jan 2015 #5
How about "I'm asking for your help to change" Baitball Blogger Jan 2015 #15
She could take a clue from JEANNIE C. RILEY machI Jan 2015 #6
Yes! cwydro Jan 2015 #8
omg! how stupid! i'm lmao! n/t orleans Jan 2015 #13
"No pets" would be a deal breaker to many condo buyers. trof Jan 2015 #7
Okay........... mrmpa Jan 2015 #9
two suggestions: sweetapogee Jan 2015 #10
My wife has re-worked the letter diabeticman Jan 2015 #11
That's a very good letter and I think the approach is perfect. mackerel Jan 2015 #12
Yes cwydro Jan 2015 #14
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