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Miles Archer

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Sun Feb 28, 2016, 10:17 AM Feb 2016

Requesting your feedback on a client-provided food porn shot (it's not one of mine) [View all]



You may have seen two "food porn" posts I did recently from my new client, one of entrees and the other of desserts. In most cases, the food was plated very well and I got what I felt were some pretty decent shots.

My client sent me the photo above a few days ago. I have a few issues I'll list, but I'm more interested in hearing what you folks have to say.

1). This is a "sampler" plate from their menu which features lasagna, chicken parm, one meatball, and one sausage. Problem is that with the sauce and cheese covering, the only thing I can clearly identify on the plate is the meatball.

2). There is spaghetti on the plate, which is not in the menu description for this item, so I don't know if there's spaghetti AND lasagna or if they substituted spaghetti FOR lasagna.

3). Technical issues (like I said, it's not my photo)...I always center the plates, because I hate clipped edges like this. lack of symmetry, for me, is a badly composed shot. Strand of spaghetti on the rim of the plate, not good. I would put the lasagna, chicken parm, meatball and sausage on the plate with NO sauce, add enough sauce to each so that at least half of the item was still visible, and then top it with enough cheese to make it look plentiful but still allowing people to see what was under the cheese and sauce. One little dot of something in the sauce on top of the spaghetti...probably a sliver of garlic...but if I had been there taking the photo, I would have plucked it off for symmetry's sake.

Your thoughts?

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I agree with your suggestions. Everything except the spaghetti needs less sauce on it. winter is coming Feb 2016 #1
It does not look appetizing. femmocrat Feb 2016 #2
There is too much going on and none of it good. auntAgonist Feb 2016 #3
Too much going on TuxedoKat Feb 2016 #4
I also agree with most everything Tab Feb 2016 #5
Saucy things are hard to shoot in the first place NV Whino Feb 2016 #6
Blechh. Looks like the food was just slopped on the plate in a mess hall The Velveteen Ocelot Feb 2016 #7
Here's my critique lunatica Feb 2016 #8
It looks like leftovers Generic Brad Feb 2016 #9
I would turn it into this (as a starter idea) Tab Feb 2016 #10
! Kali Feb 2016 #13
You still can't tell what's in it Tab Feb 2016 #19
Yikes! I agree with everything everyone else said... TreasonousBastard Feb 2016 #11
My first thought was "unappetizing". trof Feb 2016 #12
as someone who loves cheese Kali Feb 2016 #14
My first thought is buffet Paulie Feb 2016 #15
all i see is sauce and moooooooooooooooooooore sauce trueblue2007 Feb 2016 #16
I'd devour that in a heartbeat (possibly my last!), but I agree with the critiques here petronius Feb 2016 #17
Food looks cold like it's been sitting a while. nt Laffy Kat Feb 2016 #18
Guess I'll leave my fusilli + bolognese for another day! elleng Feb 2016 #20
What I would do... jmowreader Feb 2016 #21
The main problem I see is with the lighting Major Nikon Feb 2016 #22
It looks like an operation gone horribly wrong sarge43 Feb 2016 #23
Is That a Budgie Bird in the Middle? Ike Y Feb 2016 #24
That looks awful! Needs some fresh green beans mackerel Feb 2016 #25
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