Fuck it! Here's a sneak preview of the mystery/suspense novel I've been working on

[Jim__]

6. I found it a little hard to get into your story because I knew after reading the first few lines

… that he was going to spend the night at the school. I also knew that there was more to it. But, I didn’t know what that more was until the “Encore” on page 14. A lot of what occurred in between those first few lines and the “Encore” was not moving me to the point of that understanding.

Yes,the “Encore” did get pique my interest.

Again, this is not meant as a criticism, it’s only a description of how it affected me.