This could raise some hackles at first.

[cosmicone]

1. It's a very good suggestion.

I want to see Hillary giving personal anecdotes and talk about real people she has met. Then she should show how she felt inside -- angry, sad, helpless, how she reached deep down and brought out the strength and courage because she didn't want to let those people down.

Being a great lawyer means one never shows strong emotions and stick to the law. However, the most successful lawyers win juries over with emotions.

Hillary is great with facts, policy, intellect, specifics -- but it will help her connect exponentially more if she shows she is all that plus a fragile human being with vulnerabilities. She is losing women because they don't think she is a woman anymore! She can get them all back in droves.