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bravenak

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22. Thank you!!

Sat Dec 6, 2014, 03:37 PM

Dec 2014

I hope you never have to hear me sing it though. You might cry, I'm so bad.

Maybe somebody can sing it for us and record it. Might need a few more verses tho.

Just finished another one today. It was really bad yesterday but, I think I fixed it.

America The Free. I think that's a good name for it. I work best when I'm pissed off.

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When Justice died [View all] bravenak Dec 2014 OP

This needs to be a song 99th_Monkey Dec 2014 #1

Yes you may. bravenak Dec 2014 #2

Thank you. 99th_Monkey Dec 2014 #3

I've been feeling the same way. bravenak Dec 2014 #4

Will do 99th_Monkey Dec 2014 #10

You too. bravenak Dec 2014 #15

+100 nt 99th_Monkey Dec 2014 #16

You should use the updated version. bravenak Dec 2014 #33

will do.. thank you. nt 99th_Monkey Dec 2014 #34

Your words just took my breath away, bravenak. sheshe2 Dec 2014 #5

Thank you. bravenak Dec 2014 #6

Well, I too like to share. sheshe2 Dec 2014 #7

I will. bravenak Dec 2014 #8

I'm so sorry marym625 Dec 2014 #9

Don't take the guilt inside yourself. bravenak Dec 2014 #11

Thank you for the sweet reply marym625 Dec 2014 #12

Powerful gwheezie Dec 2014 #13

Thank you. bravenak Dec 2014 #14

Honest words from the heart. brer cat Dec 2014 #17

You're welcome. bravenak Dec 2014 #18

Kick and Rec JustAnotherGen Dec 2014 #19

Thanks Gen. bravenak Dec 2014 #21

you are a true poet heaven05 Dec 2014 #20

Thank you!! bravenak Dec 2014 #22

Hey kiddo, I just saw this, gramps is proud...AWESOME NoJusticeNoPeace Dec 2014 #23

Thanks man.. bravenak Dec 2014 #24

I did this one for y'all too. bravenak Dec 2014 #25

Powerful writing, bravenak. Thank you for sharing. BlueCaliDem Dec 2014 #26

Thank you, I am very hurt myself... bravenak Dec 2014 #27

Do we have a poetry group on DU? Kalidurga Dec 2014 #28

Yes, we have one. bravenak Dec 2014 #29

I posted one, but I don't want to hijack this thread in anyway. Kalidurga Dec 2014 #30

You posted it in poetry? bravenak Dec 2014 #31

I posted it in General Discussion yesterday. Kalidurga Dec 2014 #32