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politicat

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13. I do not know how to write A book, I only know how to write this one.
Wed Jul 5, 2017, 04:05 PM
Jul 2017

A paraphrase from a conversation between Gene Wolfe and Neil Gaiman, about writing. It always holds true.

For Non-fic, start with a series of outlines. The first one should be a 1 pager, extremely high level: Incitement, arc, denouement. Locations, characters. 300 words, max. The second should take that one and break it down into chapters, so 3-5 pages. Third is breakdown to scenes - usually about 10 pages or 1 page of outline per 1000-2000 words. When/if you start writing dialogue, you're done outlining and moving into writing. Then it's all BICHOKFTSB - Butt in Chair, Hands on Keyboard, Furiously Typing, Sweating Blood. Nothing substitutes for doing the work. Set a daily goal -- 1000 to 5000 words, 1 scene to 1 chapter. Never stop at the end of a chapter or scene; write the next few sentences so you can get back in the groove faster the next day.

Finish a first draft. Just finish something. Editing happens after you type THE END. You cannot edit if it's not finished. Expect the first draft to appall you about six weeks after you finish, and to delight you. But in those six weeks, don't touch it. Unless you're on deadline, then you maximize the number of days you can walk away from it, and go DO SOMETHING where you've got zero chance of messing with it while it's composting. Manuscripts must compost between 1st draft and 2nd, because your brain needs to reset.

If you're really lost, allow me to recommend a few seasons of two different podcasts as tutorials. They're both aimed at fiction, but you're talking creative non-fiction, so there are similarities. Writing Excuses, http://www.writingexcuses.com seasons 9 through current (though season 8 is also very useful, and the whole run has been excellent). Each one is 15-20 minutes long, and they break down all aspects of world building, characters, formatting, conflict, narrative arcs, you name it. (And, yes, non-fic needs narrative arcs, otherwise it's just a series of things that happened.) Do their homework. If you spend the next six weeks doing one podcast and exercise per day, you'll be a better writer at the end.

The Journeyman Writer is now an archived podcast, no longer in production (though the host has moved on to other things). Each episode is about 5 minutes long, and each episode is intensely focused on one aspect. It's about handling the details of writing and keeping with it. https://storywonk.com/category/podcasts/the-journeyman-writer/

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Fiction or nonfiction? The Blue Flower Jul 2017 #1
Non Fiction...but could go either way angstlessk Jul 2017 #5
Do you mean a memoir? That is a very specific style, otherwise non-fiction and fiction are miles anneboleyn Jul 2017 #15
Thank you, very informative angstlessk Jul 2017 #19
See I am getting angry...angry for my mother who sent me there angstlessk Jul 2017 #20
It sounds like you have a really important story to tell. Do it. Tell it. I have no Squinch Jul 2017 #27
You open a new document in Word The Velveteen Ocelot Jul 2017 #2
I want to say...very funny, but you are probably the best advise... angstlessk Jul 2017 #7
And find a good proofreader who will know you meant 'advice'. trof Jul 2017 #21
The question is...where do I post it..with proof it will not be stolen? angstlessk Jul 2017 #9
Don't post it at all, or if you do, add the copyright symbol to anything The Velveteen Ocelot Jul 2017 #11
ROFL snooper2 Jul 2017 #18
For some people, this actually works. musicblind Jul 2017 #25
Have you looked here? Wounded Bear Jul 2017 #3
Do you journal or blog? NRaleighLiberal Jul 2017 #4
I love to read, but never journaled my life angstlessk Jul 2017 #6
My advice - read Stephen King's book On Writing NRaleighLiberal Jul 2017 #8
Open Microsoft Word and type the first sentence. MineralMan Jul 2017 #10
You are correct...no shortcuts angstlessk Jul 2017 #12
Message auto-removed Name removed Jul 2017 #30
I do not know how to write A book, I only know how to write this one. politicat Jul 2017 #13
This is fabulous. I'm bookmarking this. Squinch Jul 2017 #29
I've been published three times. musicblind Jul 2017 #14
Great advice -- I also pointed out basics that are very hard (dialogue for example). I can always anneboleyn Jul 2017 #17
For some, dialogue is hard. musicblind Jul 2017 #24
Speaking more as a reader than as a writer, dialogue seems to be The Velveteen Ocelot Jul 2017 #31
Funk and White's Elements of Style... haele Jul 2017 #16
For later tnlurker Jul 2017 #22
This message was self-deleted by its author tblue37 Jul 2017 #23
One word after another. Go from there. WinkyDink Jul 2017 #26
Contact your local University English Department.... Adrahil Jul 2017 #28
Take a book you like and outline it. AngryAmish Jul 2017 #32
My mom used to do that, she was the ghostwriter for a few books. hunter Jul 2017 #33
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